Saturday, June 23, 2012

FIVE SENTENCE FICTION - FAERIES


FIVE SENTENCE FICTION                           6/22/12
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                                               FAERIES

"Ariel, how many times do I have to tell you to stay out of trouble. You got tangled in the spokes of the ferris wheel and fell off the carousel horse's tail.  You got a huge glob of sticky cotton candy in your wings and now you're all wet from that bubble-making machine.  One disaster after another. I'm tellin' mom I don't want you hanging out with me any more."






19 comments:

  1. Poor Ariel. A horrible day and a horrible sister (I'm guessing on that part). He's not having much luck!

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  2. Hi Brandon: Little Sister, Ariel is a clumsy fairy who leans on her brother to get her out of her mishaps. Thanks for visiting.

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  3. I love the sibling rivalry. He needs to have patience with Ariel! I'm assuming that she can't help her clumsiness...

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      Let's hope she outgrows it.

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  4. Ah, but I bet she had fun, anyway. Fun read.

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  5. I bet she did too. Also, annoying her brother.

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  6. I had an annoying brother, too. At least I thought so when we were children. You've never disappointed me, Lora. Cute story.

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  7. Hi Rochelle: I think all sisters have annoying brothers during childhood. You never disappoint me either, Rocky. See you next week.

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  8. Fun voice! Dropping in from FSF.

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  9. Hi Jenna: Thanks for stopping by.

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  10. Hi Lora
    This is a lovely fantasy. I should think the bubble gum could be a real problem, sticking to everything. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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    1. Hi Tiger: Not bubble gum. It was cotton candy. Big difference. Thank for stopping by.

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  11. Ha! This is a great approach to the prompt. Fun entry.

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    1. Hi...Thanks for stopping by.

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  12. This is like a snapshot of sibling annoyance. The siblings just happen to be faeries. Adorable. A cool take on the prompt, Lora.

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    1. Hi J.M. Thks for stopping by and commenting.

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  13. How cute! I imagine my brother would be this type of winged creature :)

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  14. Hi Lillie:
    You're brother must be a pixie then. Tks for stopping by.

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  15. I loved it! And I love the carnival picture.

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